Title of Essay : Family is More Important Than Friends

 

Introductory Paragraph: 

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Thesis Statement : I truly believe that family is more important than friends in life due to a few reasons. 

 

Body Paragraph 1 

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Topic sentence : Family always give us moral support when we’re having problems.

Supporting Detail 1 : Our family is always there for us through thick and thin.

Supporting Detail 2 : Our family knows how to make us happy.

Concluding Sentence : In short, our family is more important than our friends as they would always know how to help us and cheer us up.

 

Body Paragraph 2 

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Topic sentence : Our family knows us better than anyone else.

Supporting Detail 1 : Our family has been there with us since we were born.

Supporting Detail 2 : Our family knows our fears, tiny little secrets and also the things that we adore.

Concluding Sentence : To conclude, we must prioritize our family more than our friends because no one knows our personality better than them.

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Body Paragraph 3 

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Topic sentence : Our family are the ones who support us financially.

Supporting Detail 1 : Our family supports our tuition fees.

Supporting Detail 2 : Our family pays for our food and provide us with accommodation.

Concluding sentence : In conclusion, our family is very significant to us since they support us financially since we were kids.

 

Concluding Paragraph : To sum it all up, there is no doubt that our family is more important than our friends because they always give us the moral support that we need, knows us better than anyone else and also supports us financially.